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The subtle knife by ~silverwind17:iconsilverwind17:



I wrote this because I think words are one of the most dangerous of all things. the potential effects can be deadly but on the flip side can also save a life.
©2005-2009 ~silverwind17
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The subtle knife thats killing me, is in your hand.
Your words cut me deeper than you can dream,
My blood flows but you don't here my screams,
Please stop, you're killing me!
The subtle knife you hold so close,
Those deadly words of hatred cut so deep,
To deep for pain, to deep for you to understand,
Don't you see are you blind,
It's your words that cause this bind,
Your words may seem harmless but in reality,
You hold a subtle knife,
Cutting away my dignity, my very existance,
Your words are killing me,
Do you care?

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:iconsilverwind17:
I think I did that backwords, oh well, you live and learn. I claim having a blonde moment.
:icongothdevil:
No, you did it right. And I have to say that is so true. Words can hurt people the most. In the mind, heart, and soul. At times it really can feel like a knife cutting through skin. This poem is true, and that is why I like it.....

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:iconsilverwind17:
Thanks, I'm a little insecure about my writing ability.:gallery:
:icongothdevil:
its good, I really like it.....

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:iconsilverwind17:
Thank you very much.
:icongothdevil:
no problem, I like it, I really do!!!!!

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